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The Path

The path is long and climbs
Through woods I hate to see.
And yet I go there constantly,
Symptom of who I hate to be.
In slow-motion I walk along
Knowing where the thing will lead.
The walking is more tolerable
Than not walking it would be.
I'm isolated on this path,
Though others have been here.
I search the path for company,
A response that I will never see.
Walking on this path
Provides me time to think.
And yet the sounds of it
Prevent all thought and peace.
I climb this lonely path of mine,
Symptom of who I hate to be.
My dad did this before me,
This familial idiocy.
 
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I wrote this poem from a prompt on pw.org, the Web site of Poets & Writers. I opened a book at random, then chose a word from the page, then did it 9 more times and wrote 10 couplets, each containing one of the words. The book I picked without seeing the title was Migraine, by Oliver Sacks. I am not sure what the poem is about, but my dad and I both get migraines, so that might have been in the back of my mind. Let me know what you think.

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Tummy Control on Thursday, March 29, 2012 12:01 PM
I really enjoy reading this article. Hope that you would do great in upcoming time.A perfect post.
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Kaufi Delgadillo on Wednesday, April 11, 2012 4:22 PM
I like this, I can tell you are a straight writer, you write from the heart with no riddles or illusions. It paints a clear picture of where you were.
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TommiaW on Wednesday, April 11, 2012 10:02 PM
A wonderful poem to a quirky challenge! Impressive!
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Felicity Fox on Monday, April 16, 2012 5:28 AM
Like the start of this..
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Kathy on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 10:32 AM
Thanks! I want to do more of thes poetry challenges. I don't think of myself as a poet, so it's a stretch to do them.
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